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“ And in eight lines of trimeter, the half-meter that suggests ballad form without the extra foot — rhymed abab with a feminine ending in the b rhymes ”

Surely this is a typo. The a rhymes, not the b rhymes, are feminine.

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Fixed!

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Apr 2Liked by Sally Thomas, Joseph Bottum

Perhaps my favorite poet. In "Loveliest of Trees," it may not be noticed that the "snow" on the branches is an English expression meaning "blossoming"--therefore, the white. Subtle . . . and confusing.

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Apr 2Liked by Sally Thomas, Joseph Bottum

One of the most incredible people I’ve ever met found this poem very meaningful - Vietnam War POW, General Chuck Boyd. https://youtu.be/dELzWrE5VFI?si=LQfEKAKdPF-FkwFR

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