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Oct 10Liked by Joseph Bottum

Another lovely poem, such precise imagery creating a quiet melancholy (but not hopeless) atmosphere. This is probably just me, but I have difficulty pronouncing "scents" much differently from "sense" and when I think of "sense" in those first lines, it adds a dimension to the poem which I very much like. All these scents have some sense to offer us about life . . . I also love the final line: "sad songs of Autumn mirth." An oxymoron that seems to me to sum up life itself.

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Oct 10Liked by Joseph Bottum

This is a WW1 battlefield in transmogrification though, no?

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Yes, I think, with the burned waste given a horrific irony.

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Yes, I can’t unsee shattered bloody limb bones in rhubarb and celery sticks. Genius imagery.

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Oct 9Liked by Joseph Bottum

And any garden is bound to be the first, Edenic one--in fall here. Lovely poem and essay--and comments, too. I won't tire of Thomas anytime soon.

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The seasons all have their individual essence as do days. The best some can manage is TGI Friday; but perhaps those reading this don’t need ww anything to be drunk on decaying birch, and excited by Micklemas😸

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This poem calls to mind Seamus Heaney's poem, Digging, which begins with a metaphor of the pen as a gun and ends with the pen as a spade and in between recalls his father digging in the garden and his grandfather digging peat. I wonder was Heaney thinking of Thomas, the solder-poet, digging in his garden?

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Oct 8Liked by Sally Thomas, Joseph Bottum

It is indeed enough.

As one writer wrote, about the separation of life and the union in death: “The pain of separation is as nothing, The joy of union is all.”.

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Oct 8Liked by Sally Thomas, Joseph Bottum

Lovely essay and poem.

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Oct 8·edited Oct 8Author

I misapplied the caption on the painting in this post. The picture is Pissarro's Landscape at Louveciennes (Autumn), from the Getty Museum, not his Autumn in Eragny. Fixed now.

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Oct 8Liked by Sally Thomas, Joseph Bottum

Thank you so much for this sensitive account of the poem, which really makes one want to read it again and again.

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Oct 8Liked by Sally Thomas, Joseph Bottum

I will anxious to read the comments. I read this as him digging a grave, perhaps his. Thanks again for this workday delight.

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A good thought, the gravedigging.

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