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Beth Impson's avatar

The ending is so sad -- life beyond the grave is a mere illusion -- but indeed the poem is beautiful. The first time through I just heard the sounds and fell in love with them before I even realized the meaning of the words.

Karen D'Anselmi's avatar

Hi Sally, I found this to be an inspiring thought-journey, going so much further than the usual taking the ole shell off the shelf and listening for the sea..the poet hears his own pulses, finding them as vast, or more so, than the sea. That seems so real, not an illusion...And then to hint at hearing heaven in it all, even. At the end he shuts it down. I don't accept his conclusion but I still loved this poem.

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