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Keir's avatar

To my ear, at least, certainly monometer on the short lines. Or, to put it another way, the final foot of a hexameter set apart - or "Dissever[ed]"!

That disseverance is strongest in the opening quatrain. The opening line, a question, is its own sentence, and the following monometer is *split* into two one word questions in response! And then the final isolated verb of the quatrain, "Dissever?", is set apart not only through lineation, but through rearrangement of syntax.

But the enjambments become more fluid and open.

After a series of anguished questions, the enjambment on "...let to thy hearing creep / my crying." is markedly more fluid than in the previous pairings, denoting an active plea.

And the enjambments are open where he proclaims his helpless vulnerability without the aid of the "eyes, and light" he beseeches from his Lord: "...that in my ruin he / Prevailed", "...me / Assailed".

And they're most fluid of all in the final quatrain, denoting the "trust" he is choosing to commit, and the "joy" he is taking in doing so. And the emphatic, but painfully divided, "WHAT? Ever?" of the opening monometer is *unified* in these final two monometers: "GREAT PIty:" & "SONG'S DItty."

Richard M Doerflinger's avatar

Wonderful! One typo, I think -- should it be "THY hidden face"? I also wonder if "ditty" at that time had the demeaning connotations it has now.

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