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Frank Dent's avatar

The similarity of images in this poem and “Prufrock” suggests a linkage.

“burnt-out ends of smoky days” (“butt-ends of my days and ways”)

“sawdust-trampled street” (“sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells”)

“all the hands” (“all the works and days of hands”)

“fingers stuffing pipes” (“smoke that rises from the pipes”)

Possibly by giving up tobacco and insisting on sanitation we’ve lost access to a lot of the sensory world.

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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

I think the final line of the first section "and then the lighting of the lamps" is a momentary spot of beauty in the grimness. At least it's always felt like that to me: a magic moment when suddenly the ugly urban landscape takes on a softer glow. It feels like it chimes with the "infinitely gentle, / Infinitely suffering thing."

And maybe it's just my romantic heart and my tenderness for Eliot, but I've always felt like the light creeping in between the shutters and the sparrows in the gutters are glimpses of something that could be lovely could be hopeful, that the poet in taking his inventory of the urban landscape notes. To me the poem has a rhythm that goes back and forth between the ugly and sordid and the little spots of something fairer that give the mind little islands of rest. Like Wordsworth's spots of time have diminished and grown dim, become mere freckles or ghosts flickering in the periphery of your vision, but aren't completely absent.

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