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Robert S Miola's avatar

Thanks for that clear elucidation of the deceptively simple lyric and especially the connections with the wondrous Intimations Ode. Hard to understand that emotional “natural piety” finding fulfillment in Church of England orthodoxy, no? Odd how good W can be and also how prosaic, breathless, and, ripe for parody and bad imitation. (I can’t think of another good poet who has inspired so much bad poetry in others.) As you and Jody Bottum have demonstrated before, poetry is usually philosophical with “dubious success” and Raysor’s assessment (“cloudy and baffling metaphysical idealism”) has, of course, precedent in Byron’s witty judgements in Don Juan:

“So that their plan and prosody are eligible,

Unless, like Wordsworth, they prove unintelligible.”

“Thou shalt believe in Milton, Dryden Pope;

Thou shalt not set up Wordsworth, Coleridge, Southey;

Because the first is crazed beyond all hope,

The second drunk, the third so quaint and mouthy”

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Keir's avatar

Those look like interesting articles you've linked, Sally. I appreciate the research!

Line 6 is actually a dimeter (fitting that the shortest and longest lines should be, respectively, in reference to death and the stretching out of days).

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