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Beth Impson's avatar

Thanks so much for the background of this compelling poem.

Isabel Chenot's avatar

It's so compelling that the imagery of water evokes grief but also "the first nothing", the watery darkness and chaos before the light of creation and any good being.

Sally Thomas's avatar

That's a great observation --- thank you!

Sally Thomas's avatar

It also suggests a watery womb, from which, being "re-begot," he emerges not into light, but into more darkness.

Isabel Chenot's avatar

I continue to learn so much from this substack and both your work here. I hope you are getting and enjoying a bit of a break :-)

Sally Thomas's avatar

Thanks for the kind words and the good wishes. It has been nice to catch our breath for a bit, and fun to revisit some of these older posts.